Need help with flow..."Before I'm Gone"?

Question:My eyes do not sparkle as they did,
They lead to a broken soul.
Behind this forced half smile,
Is a heart begging to be whole.

Next to each other, we are worlds apart,
Each breath I draw causes pain.
All my thoughts are of breaking free,
But do I want to start new again?

Just come here and hold me,
Forget 'bout where you've got to go.
Kiss me like it'll be the last time,
Say you love me as if I don't know.

Take my hand and lead me to dance,
Our heart beats will be the song.
Lose yourself in the rhythm of my kiss,
But please do it before I'm gone.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: My eyes do not sparkle as they did,
They lead to a broken soul.
Behind this forced half smile,
Is a heart begging to be whole.

Next to each other, we are worlds apart,
Each breath I draw causes pain.
All my thoughts are of breaking free,
But do I want to start new again?

Just come here and hold me,
Forget 'bout where you've got to go.
Kiss me like it'll be the last time,
Say you love me as if I don't know.

Take my hand and lead me to dance,
Our heart beats will be the song.
Lose yourself in the rhythm of my kiss,
But please do it before I'm gone.

Not feeling very creative, however...what about...
Ignore the places you must go.

Now that is excellent! well done