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Position:Home>Poetry> Tonight's sky?Question:Tonight’s sky How the evening moods have changed I look through my window at 6:14 Through the high trees standing before me Gently swaying in the mild spring breeze Neither leaves nor blossom upon their arms ……. Peaceful and elegant; how I love my views I gaze through the gaps upon the horizon I see blue and white rays …… with subtle greys With purples and reds pushing their way through The skies beginning to set ……… a magpie flies into the midst. I now look out, it’s been 2hours I only looked up to draw my curtains; The colour now a deep dark blue The naked trees now look so spooky Just like they came out of a scary picture book ……. How beautiful the spring skies look I missed the sun setting I must have been engrossed by my evening duties that I love the most. I will post the last verse in additional, not enough space. What do you think of my brand spanking new poem? Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Tonight’s sky How the evening moods have changed I look through my window at 6:14 Through the high trees standing before me Gently swaying in the mild spring breeze Neither leaves nor blossom upon their arms ……. Peaceful and elegant; how I love my views I gaze through the gaps upon the horizon I see blue and white rays …… with subtle greys With purples and reds pushing their way through The skies beginning to set ……… a magpie flies into the midst. I now look out, it’s been 2hours I only looked up to draw my curtains; The colour now a deep dark blue The naked trees now look so spooky Just like they came out of a scary picture book ……. How beautiful the spring skies look I missed the sun setting I must have been engrossed by my evening duties that I love the most. I will post the last verse in additional, not enough space. What do you think of my brand spanking new poem? Sorry, i don't like happy poems, they are sick. *gag* Nice reasonably unique form, good pantameter and excellent use of syntax to evoke emotion. WOW i actually felt the emotion in it.... thnx for checking out my poem as well ;) |