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Question:As I wake up in the morning
and you are sleeping by my side,
I am awe struck at the realization
that I have all your love.

You're not out there with your buddies
while they drink and whoop it up.
You're at home in peaceful contentment
with a smile that lights my heart.

And in calm reassurance
you kiss my hand and touch my cheek.
The greastest thing in all the world
is a man who loves so deep.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: As I wake up in the morning
and you are sleeping by my side,
I am awe struck at the realization
that I have all your love.

You're not out there with your buddies
while they drink and whoop it up.
You're at home in peaceful contentment
with a smile that lights my heart.

And in calm reassurance
you kiss my hand and touch my cheek.
The greastest thing in all the world
is a man who loves so deep.

Nice, nice, nice! Wonderful feelings. Simplistic, yet you covered it well!

thats beautiful - I have an excercise book I put poems I like in. Can i put this in?

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it was lovely, i wish i could write better poems with better themes. my poems always seem so sad. hey! good luck about that guy...

Your poem seems to suggest that what you are experiencing is new to you. "I am awe struck..." That you have had some failed experiences, but to your surprise this one might actually work out. I can imagine you looking at him as he sleeps with joy in your heart, something which you have not experienced for a long time. For your sake I hope that it does.

Robert

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Keep it up... you are bound to get better! :D
Good Luck!

It;s a delightful poem.I love your style. Gripping and clear.

You write of a moment in time, yet the emotion in it is timeless. This poem beautifully illuminates a deep love, and the single gesture of affection is very poignant and endearing-"you kiss my hand and touch my cheek". I love that it is so simply stated but captures something so rich and complex. Thank you.