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Position:Home>Poetry> I just revised the poem, and improved it. what does my poem mean?Question:the two flusher, and how you took me by total surprise just walking down the street suddenly i knew you were going to take me for a ride a good clean toilet in this dirty city is a hard thing to find but when i saw that white sparkling bowl it blew my mind i wanted to hold you and play in the water and some day give you my daughter pain in my stomach from a heavy load hoping that a little gas could explode then when it's done and i whipe i feel great in this good time life here i am a new born man i'm two pounds lighter as flush the can happy smile sunny face i feel god on earth in my new "found" place and in spirit i smile like a gusher god bless heavy fiber and that wonderful 2 flusher the end Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: the two flusher, and how you took me by total surprise just walking down the street suddenly i knew you were going to take me for a ride a good clean toilet in this dirty city is a hard thing to find but when i saw that white sparkling bowl it blew my mind i wanted to hold you and play in the water and some day give you my daughter pain in my stomach from a heavy load hoping that a little gas could explode then when it's done and i whipe i feel great in this good time life here i am a new born man i'm two pounds lighter as flush the can happy smile sunny face i feel god on earth in my new "found" place and in spirit i smile like a gusher god bless heavy fiber and that wonderful 2 flusher the end it's all about 'a good clean toilet in this dirty city' weird but by no means gross. the word choice points to 'i feel great in this good time life' - flusher heavy fiber two pounds lighter as flush bowl it blew my mind a little gas could explode i like that uncertain feeling - 'god on earth' - reminds me of Kingsley Amis. What a surprise...a pot in Frank's poem... |