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Question:the two flusher, and how you took me
by total surprise
just walking down the street suddenly i knew
you were going to take me for a ride
a good clean toilet in this dirty city
is a hard thing to find
but when i saw that white sparkling
bowl it blew my mind
i wanted to hold you
and play in the water
and some day give you my daughter
pain in my stomach from a heavy load
hoping that a little gas could explode
then when it's done and i whipe
i feel great in this good time life
here i am a new born man
i'm two pounds lighter as flush the can
happy smile sunny face
i feel god on earth in my
new "found" place
and in spirit i smile like a
gusher
god bless heavy fiber
and that wonderful 2 flusher


the end


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: the two flusher, and how you took me
by total surprise
just walking down the street suddenly i knew
you were going to take me for a ride
a good clean toilet in this dirty city
is a hard thing to find
but when i saw that white sparkling
bowl it blew my mind
i wanted to hold you
and play in the water
and some day give you my daughter
pain in my stomach from a heavy load
hoping that a little gas could explode
then when it's done and i whipe
i feel great in this good time life
here i am a new born man
i'm two pounds lighter as flush the can
happy smile sunny face
i feel god on earth in my
new "found" place
and in spirit i smile like a
gusher
god bless heavy fiber
and that wonderful 2 flusher


the end

it's all about 'a good clean toilet in this dirty city'
weird but by no means gross. the word choice points to 'i feel great in this good time life' -
flusher
heavy fiber
two pounds lighter as flush
bowl it blew my mind
a little gas could explode

i like that uncertain feeling - 'god on earth' - reminds me of Kingsley Amis.

What a surprise...a pot in Frank's poem...