Do you like my poem about india?

Question:vindoloo

by frank

tandoori with your red curry
spiced just right
red and molten
sitting in my gut all night
ready to explode
vindaloo, from india
a brown gravy
extra extra spicy
most beautiful dish on earth
a mango lassi on the side
to cool off the heat
and warm beer to wash it
all down as i eat
if i were to get executed
in court i'd strike a deal
my last meal
would be a vindaloo
curry from indian hill
oh india, india
take me to your heart,
show me your ancient
mysteries
i'm waiting for answer
that i know i'll never
find
it's already waiting
deep inside my own
mind.

the end

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: vindoloo

by frank

tandoori with your red curry
spiced just right
red and molten
sitting in my gut all night
ready to explode
vindaloo, from india
a brown gravy
extra extra spicy
most beautiful dish on earth
a mango lassi on the side
to cool off the heat
and warm beer to wash it
all down as i eat
if i were to get executed
in court i'd strike a deal
my last meal
would be a vindaloo
curry from indian hill
oh india, india
take me to your heart,
show me your ancient
mysteries
i'm waiting for answer
that i know i'll never
find
it's already waiting
deep inside my own
mind.

the end

It's no wonder you're "Frank the gas tank" if you honestly eat all those spicy foods you talk about!!!
Comes a time, all that spicy stuff, is but a memory and a sigh much like your poem here.

By the way, it's wonderful, almost felt like I was there. I love poetry when it does that.

Very Nice!

wow! fantastic!!!!!!!! great job well done

its good, but it would be better in free verse

It is very nice.

its not about india its about foods in india.nice.u make me feel a sudden urge to eat indian food.congrats.

pretty good for being drunk!

Generally speaking, I can't stand rhyming poetry. I liked this though. One thing: all that great food with warm beer? Why not make it cold? Anyway I liked it. Maybe that's cause I am hungry.