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Position:Home>Poetry> Can any poets tell me if this (short) poem is an epistle or not?Question:He was here, that bear Blue Mac, red chowder head hat An ickle bickle furry flasher Fond of marmalade and fwuffy cat Sometimes covered, other times brasher To Teddy it now matters little Of whether or not we are tittled You see, he’s gone away Left his slicker and hat astray On the streets, in the dark, in the pouring rain I fear we will never see him again Off he goes through the London fog A four-and-a-half inch ghost Haunting wet streets in search for a Penny Along the sea-whipped English coast Those nights when the fog horn blows People say they've seen him, sans clothes In front of a light house beam Opening his coat for all to see We hardly knew ye, Teddy Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: He was here, that bear Blue Mac, red chowder head hat An ickle bickle furry flasher Fond of marmalade and fwuffy cat Sometimes covered, other times brasher To Teddy it now matters little Of whether or not we are tittled You see, he’s gone away Left his slicker and hat astray On the streets, in the dark, in the pouring rain I fear we will never see him again Off he goes through the London fog A four-and-a-half inch ghost Haunting wet streets in search for a Penny Along the sea-whipped English coast Those nights when the fog horn blows People say they've seen him, sans clothes In front of a light house beam Opening his coat for all to see We hardly knew ye, Teddy I don't know an epistle from a pistol. not really. i guess if so many people are reading it than maybe yes. i don't know defined Poetry style either. I also don't see a da^^^^ed thing funny about it. But i do know a pistol of a poem when i read it. you're right, i didn't know him, but i loved him in that ickel way. Your pistol makes me sadder than i could ever say. i miss his humor and his purple penny mole in the most horrendous way. i wish they hadn't left us here alone, and had never gone astray. whatever made them do it disappoints me everyday. for not calling them to come back, this time to stay. Last i saw him, he was a post-box before that, in a mankini looking so happy and gay - not in that way. it was the way he sent himself off i guess it isn't as much fun anymore on Y/A it is very sad i cry, come back, I'll pay. I only have snake dollars though. $13.58. 2 o'clock meds. sorry for the long answer. You diluted me Guinness with tears this time... Still laughing! (Thoroughly enjoyed your 'sea-whipped English coast".) "An epistle", I'm thinking, I'm thinking. I don't know if it's an epistle -- but I just about did from laughing. This is funny! Yeah, we hardly knew him. Yet we missed him..... atleast I did! The Funny ickle bickly fwuffy bear with a lot of dictionary crammed into his head. He has a way with words and i strongly admire him. The heck, where is the spirit of the team? Cos I still got a Penny left. I can already imagine it with music: ''Penfold: The Musical''. I'm trembling with emotion. Alas poor Penfold, the world was just too much. Your poem was very touchy feely I stroked it with my grey matter and smacked the bear for flirting with the cat. Anyhow the cat was a myth he hates large cats as they scare his pants off. He's thinks he is an entrepreneur too so he doesn't think he is poor at all but he is richer for knowing you lot on Yahpoo. i don't know. but i loved him too. i'm all the way with boo on this one. we were a great team even though i hardly understood a word he or moley ever said. i miss super squirrel cage too. we were good together until our bi-polarness got out of hand. god knows we all tried but bi-polar is tough to beat. |