My final poem. I think I just quit. Enjoy it.?

Question:Like a bad penny you always turn up,
I thought I was clear stay out of my life.
You lied and you hurt me, got what you deserved,
what makes you think I have forgotten your game.

You led me on deftly creating so much pain,
Laughing each night when I turned in to bed.
Your game came unraveled, you sickened my life,
I hope you are happy, revenge will be mine.

God may forgive, The Dark Prince, he does not,
Forever behind you, I'll know where you are.
Try to esacape me, you know thats a dream,
I always get even, no matter the means.

So remember the pleasure you had all that time,
tormenting my needs and torturing my mind.
I'll have the last laugh, you know in your heart,
Time it runs short now, The Prince always laughs last.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Like a bad penny you always turn up,
I thought I was clear stay out of my life.
You lied and you hurt me, got what you deserved,
what makes you think I have forgotten your game.

You led me on deftly creating so much pain,
Laughing each night when I turned in to bed.
Your game came unraveled, you sickened my life,
I hope you are happy, revenge will be mine.

God may forgive, The Dark Prince, he does not,
Forever behind you, I'll know where you are.
Try to esacape me, you know thats a dream,
I always get even, no matter the means.

So remember the pleasure you had all that time,
tormenting my needs and torturing my mind.
I'll have the last laugh, you know in your heart,
Time it runs short now, The Prince always laughs last.

F*ck Cami/Shelly/whatever she calls herself. She's a f*cking b*tch for what she did to you. Why the hell would someone do that? I want to reach through the screen and strangle her. God, how can someone hurt another person so much? It's just, unbelieveable. And to everyone who gave a bad comment, (jewel,unclegray), F*CK YOU TOO!!! You don't know Steve. You know the dark prince, and his poems, but you don't know Steve. Maybe you should get to know him before dissing him. And he's the best damn poet ever. SO SHUT YOUR F*CKING MOUTHES!!!!
And if you quit, then you would be giveing in to her. She wants you to be miserable. Don't give her that satisfaction.
I love you Steve, you are the best brother ever.
-KAra-

great poem i dont think you should quit

Humans don't quit.
They give up.
So don't you dare sit.
Because life will turn up.

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7 days without soccer makes one weak

wow...full of strong emotion. amazing.

please don't quit :(

I love your work!

one thing......where's the title?

By "my final poem" do you mean to say you're going to commit suicide?
If so, i think you need to go to church right now and pray.

If you mean that you're just going to quit writing, then you are blind.
When someone has talent like you do, you can't just quit. The poems will still come to you even when you don't want them to. They'll haunt youin your sleep for not giving them the credit and life they deserve.
Either way, you need to get your thoughts straight.

you really shouldn't stop writting, you have a great talent for it!

This is terribly tragic, that you feel so despondent that it has evolved into vengeance, which only further violates the mind and increases the pain, no matter how appropriate it may seem. Or is this poem a shield for you, instead,constructed to be impenetrable by using word of war. Whatever the reason is that you wrote it, it obviously is a very effective poem, full of powerful emotions and vindictive thought. My hope is that you do not really mean this is your final poem. Selfishly, I would so much miss your poetry. You are loved and needed here.

that is a great poem,full of emotion,but also revenge. Don't give up because then she'll win...DON'T GIVE HER THAT SATISFACTION!!

Dude... An angry poem... I love the emotions
Is the title "I think I just quit" or what?

Or are you saying that you will never write again?

There is like 1 out of 10 good poetry writers...
You are one of the few that can write with every little thing you can

Why quit? There's no point to trying to quit... Please don't.

Your poetry is amazing and I wish that I could just steal the talent away from you.... haha j/k

If this is your last poem, could you send me some of your older ones? I want to study the emotions and words... and maybe use them for some references.

I'll send you my only good one if you send me some of your older ones

Please keep writing if you are intending on quiting

To the three sentences that form the question: Great. That's even better. I didn't.

As usual, the poem you have presented for is lacking in several areas. How you have so many fools thinking you have marvelous poetic talent is truly appalling.

Firstly, saying you are "Dark" or a "Prince" is completely irrelative to being such. To contemplate suicide (falsely, I might add) just because you know your ignorant minions will eat it up is perhaps your most pitiful offense.

Your poetry is not dark in any sense. In all honesty it is trite, processed, hackneyed. You recycle the same thoughts and the same subjects repeatedly. Darkness, blood, dreams, love lost. It's all the same. Just self pitying bile. hehe.

So please tell me it's true that you are quitting. That would be excellent.

i do hope that you mean final poem of the night....and i do hope it's not me you are talking about...if you did quit then who would be the one to give advice on what to do when there's writer's block, and who's poems would leave me speechless every time i read them with out fail? please continue writing Steve...just because of her you are stopping? just because of her you are giving up on your true calling? do you realize how many people will be disappointed to learn that you have quit writing? including me? who would i call master? who would call me grasshopper?
I'll make you a bet! if you can stop writing for half a day and not get any inspiration then I'll let go of the fact that you will stop...it wont be easy but i know, i cant feel that that promise wont last long. i can feel that you will go back to writing in two days tops, maybe three......so many, many people will be begging you to continue writing......please Steve, think this over about your leaving the writing world...the poetry world....

Edit: oh and to jewels...
SCr3W YOU! YOU SON OF A B1TC4 B24T2RD! YOU HAVE NO IDEA WHAT YOU'RE TALKING ABOUT YOU DONT KNOW WHY HIS NMAE IS THE DARK PRINCE YUO DONT KNOW WHY HE WRITES THE WAY HE DOES AND YOU DONT KNOW WHY WE LOVE HIS POETRY! IF I COULD I WOULD REACH IN FROM THE COMPUTER AND GRAB YOUR HEAD AND BASH IT INTO YOUR COMPUTER! YOU SHOULD SEAK ILL OF STEVE JUST BECAUSE YOU ARE JEALOUS OF HOW MANY PEOPLE ADORE HIM AND HIS SKILL OF WRITING! LETS SEE YOU WRITE BETTER!

Steve, i don't really understand the truth of what actually happens between you and Shelley. I hate to be biased cause i haven't heard your side of the story. I love all my friends. Love you both. It saddens me when things got so ugly as i can see in your poems and hers. Just hang on... Don't quit. Your art and your poetry shouldn't be destroyed by your personal matters. You are a great poet. Keep on posting your poems. We love it! =)

M.

Hey, wat u sayin', Man? You quit ?- nah.

Sorry, that was my attempt to write in the vernacular - I'm sure you saw through it.

Some days are down and some are up
Just bide your time to fill your cup
To-day may be black but there's always tomorrow.
Don't dwell on the darkside - banish your sorrow.
Pick up your pen
Start writing again
As your fans on this site,
Will definitely say
Don't give up.Stand and fight
For at least one more day.

ah, what? i go away for a week and come back to this...

a pretty good poem, despite the somewhat bitter subject. whatever you mean by "quit", i think it will be a great loss.

i would cut the "now" in the last line. throughout it could use a little work, but that goes for all poems. if you're bent on havign this your last poem, please, at least make it as good as can be.

This isn't a poem, it's a banal whine, a prosaic rant.
Stop moping and get on with life. Try writing poetry.
Jewels has got it exactly right. How many more people have the courage and the brains to see through this self-regarding muttering?
Hey everybody, if you want to see a real poem, check out mine. It's on this site.

(Edit)
OK, so I don't know this fellow, so by definition it's not him I'm having a go at.
It's this unconvincing and immature tantrum claiming to be a poem.
The vile and inarticulate reactions from a number of his supporters say it all.

Very emotional. I could picture Vincent Price with his demonic laugh going on in this one, or maybe Jack Nicholson. As you know, women are devious creatures, and will do anything to get under your skin. Ignoring them works best. Thanks for sharing.

the poem is awesome! i love the plot of it and it has so much power, depth and strength!

whatever you do please don't quit! you are a powerful person and please don't let what someone did to you get in the way of being an amazing writer! i know everything is in exclamation points but really please don't quit! or kill yourself for that matter. be the bigger person and show that yeah it hurt what that lady did to you but u r ready to move on! steve you were meant to write.

edit: I COMPLETELY AGREE WITH DEADLY POET. THAT JEWELS PERSON HONESTLY HAS NO IDEA WHO YOU ARE IN THE UNDERSTANDING OF YOUR POERTY AND LIFE.

I love this poem. I wish I could have put my name on it and
send it to someone. We think alike. Never give up.

Hey prince that woman doesn't deserve that honor ,which she will get if u quit writing ...don't let her win....your poems are for us...how can you forget us.....you are such a nice and good poet ... carry on.

This is an intense poem, fantastic, really.

Please don't quit.
I am a fan of all your poems, and I am terribaly upset that you want to quit.
With someone with as much talent as you, they deserve so much more than what you give yourself credit for.
All your poems are fantastic, and if writing is the way to keep yourself living, write even more!
You have influenced so many of us here on YA! so don't give up!
I'm sure I can say this for more than a few, but we would miss you if you stopped writing!

Steve i know this is not towards me as you told me last week you were getting married and had bought a home.all i did was say congrats on your new life and i hope you'll always be happy.now to all of you who said this is about Shelley is impossible as we are good friends ' at least Steve said we are as i have a new boyfriend 24 and Steve has a new girlfriend that he loves.have you not seen his love poems for her.Steve I hope i am not getting some blame about this again asd i have not been in or around you ' as i want peace and not all this drama. Shelley

Dont u dare quit! Ur like one of my fav poets!
Leave the revenge for God for he is much more
powerful and will make sure she gets what she
deserves. He always does. I know from experience.
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You will keep writing, I know it. Take it, and run with it.

"There was that law of life, so cruel and so just, that one must grow or else pay more for remaining the same."
--Norman Mailer

and

"The rung of a ladder was never meant to rest upon, but only to hold a man's foot long enough to enable him to put the other somewhat higher."
--Thomas Henry Huxley

Good luck to you!