I know this is soft and sappy and a love poem. So what. Do you like it.?

Question:"you"

I cannot seem to find the words,
they vanish right before my eyes.
My heart, my life, all that I am,
this my love, I understand.

You make me feel light as air,
I float among the clouds today.
The look you give me makes me shake,
it is for you that I was born.

You lie beside me every night,
It's like my dreams come true.
Your skin as soft as persian silk
the girl I always knew.

I know I say it all the time,
sometimes it seems like only words.
But I promise it's not trite,
I love you girl and no one else.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: "you"

I cannot seem to find the words,
they vanish right before my eyes.
My heart, my life, all that I am,
this my love, I understand.

You make me feel light as air,
I float among the clouds today.
The look you give me makes me shake,
it is for you that I was born.

You lie beside me every night,
It's like my dreams come true.
Your skin as soft as persian silk
the girl I always knew.

I know I say it all the time,
sometimes it seems like only words.
But I promise it's not trite,
I love you girl and no one else.

you are so sweet, your girl is lucky as hell!

Its cute!!

omg i luv it i wish someone would make me a poem

That was really good. Ur really good. Did u just feel like writing it, or is it like homework. GOOD JOB

sure. if it was about me.

Thats quite sweet,..... in an utterly cheesey way!! x

Yes! It's so romantical! :) :D

beautiful absolutely breath taking

i like it you should tell it to the girl you like or curentely going out with

nice.

Wow, this is a great poem. It's really deep. The only part I think ruins the poem is "The look you give me makes me shake" That line makes the poem sound like a joke but besides that it's pretty good.
Thanks :)

Do you have an older brother?

That is so sweet! Give it to the girl who you wrote about! She will be amazed!

not bad dark prince

Good poem, what a lucky girl!

love it

eh... it was alright. Good sappy love poem.

i like your dark side better though.

-Kara-

i never read nisei poem then this befor.it is good . O.K.

It's easy to see where OFF YOUR ROCKER got his name, he is. If he doesn't like your castles and dragons, what do you figure he'd think of mine..... I thought it was a good poem, and there is nothing wrong with soft, sappy love poems. Ladies love to have them wrote about them, and as a hopeless romantic, I love to write them. Well done.

nice poem and she is a lucky lady and your lucky too to have such a great gift of poetry....

It was a lovely Romantic poem that i enjoyed reading
very much.
Thank you for sharing!
=D
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This is a beautiful love poem.

beautifully written my friend

yay for big bro! i really like it but i have to agree with silent...i like your dark side better...sorry to say...but all of your poetry never fails to amaze me! i love you big bro and i hope you get better soon!!!!!
~apprentice

Edit: people! understand the facts before you comment on it! to be writing all this brilliant stuff he'd have to be very experianced! it's not like he would turn that in for homework and he doesnt have to do homework anyway! geez you guys are stupid! (no offense)

lucky lady...

There is some lovely stuff in here. It seems natural, unforced and not all airy-fairy. I agree with the 'girls' I'm sure if this was written for one girl in particular she would love to receive it.
The first two lines say it all. It is impossible sometimes to put how you feel into words - but then the next two lines, so simple, say it all.
Thanks

Very interesting. Like it a lot

Very cute! Nice touch in it, Monsieur Dark Prince.

Ok get out of fairy land. Unless your hidin away in some castle tower amongst dragons and princesses, dont write stuff like that.