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Question:Title: To My Unknown Friend (You've Found A Friend)"

I know you're out there some where,
Praying to have a friend that really care,
If it's meant to be god will bring us together,
To make eachothers life alittle bit better.

Once we find eachother you'll always have a friend,
A friend that will never leave you and be there until the end,
I'll give you all of my love and attention,
You'll always have a friend that will listen.

If you ever need a shoulder to lean on and cry,
Remember you've found a friend to wipe your eyes dry,
I'll shield you from the rain and be your protection,
Take you by your hand and lead you in the right direction.

To hold you close when you feel you're on your own,
To reassure you that you'll never have to feel alone,
To battle storms with you, you thought you couldn't face,
To give you somewhere you can go, a safe and special place.

I'll be there when you need to talk, or feel the need to rant,
To encourage you, inspire you, when you feel that you can't,
Succeed in something, that you've always longed to do,
Because it is my duty as a friend to believe in you.

So always remember when you feel alone, that I'm standing here,
Offering you my friendship, wanting to hold you near,
If ever you need someone to comfort you at all,
Remember these very words, know you only have to call.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Title: To My Unknown Friend (You've Found A Friend)"

I know you're out there some where,
Praying to have a friend that really care,
If it's meant to be god will bring us together,
To make eachothers life alittle bit better.

Once we find eachother you'll always have a friend,
A friend that will never leave you and be there until the end,
I'll give you all of my love and attention,
You'll always have a friend that will listen.

If you ever need a shoulder to lean on and cry,
Remember you've found a friend to wipe your eyes dry,
I'll shield you from the rain and be your protection,
Take you by your hand and lead you in the right direction.

To hold you close when you feel you're on your own,
To reassure you that you'll never have to feel alone,
To battle storms with you, you thought you couldn't face,
To give you somewhere you can go, a safe and special place.

I'll be there when you need to talk, or feel the need to rant,
To encourage you, inspire you, when you feel that you can't,
Succeed in something, that you've always longed to do,
Because it is my duty as a friend to believe in you.

So always remember when you feel alone, that I'm standing here,
Offering you my friendship, wanting to hold you near,
If ever you need someone to comfort you at all,
Remember these very words, know you only have to call.

Amazing! the rhymes. very meaningful. All you need is more deep words. But you're good. :) well done. keep on writing.

omg that is soo sweet i really like it..... are u a poet?

I love the idea behind this. It needs some work, some words need to be fixed so that it flows a little better if you really want to make it a quality poem-now it's not a bad poem- don't get me wrong you do have talent. I want you to use this talent and make it better. Don't stop writing just because someone says they see problem with your poem. I have problems with my poems and so I can see my problems in your poem. I don't want to be mean I'm trying to help you. You can be a really great poet because you have got the talent behind you.
Don't force rhymes, okay? Don't make words sound weird to rhyme with other words like there and care you need to say cares not care even though there does not have an s on the end and care needs an s on the end. Each other is two different words. You have a wonderful poem going. I'm glad to have read it. Now you read, read, read poetry to better understand how to write it. All I want to do is help.