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Position:Home>Poetry> Tell me what you think: "the end"?Question:Why'd you always have to say goodbye why'd you always have to make me cry Was loving you not good enough or was causing me pain the better stuff I opened up and let you in you broke my heart over and over again I took you back time after time saying no never crossed my mind I hated the games you always played makes me wonder why i stayed Maybe because i hoped you changed but every time always ended the same I'm letting go and saying my goodbye's now there's no more tears in my eyes The seconds,minutes,hours,and days are slowly but surely fading away I've held on for far too long now we've reached the end of our song **please tell me what you thing... Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Why'd you always have to say goodbye why'd you always have to make me cry Was loving you not good enough or was causing me pain the better stuff I opened up and let you in you broke my heart over and over again I took you back time after time saying no never crossed my mind I hated the games you always played makes me wonder why i stayed Maybe because i hoped you changed but every time always ended the same I'm letting go and saying my goodbye's now there's no more tears in my eyes The seconds,minutes,hours,and days are slowly but surely fading away I've held on for far too long now we've reached the end of our song **please tell me what you thing... I like it. It's not really unique. Nice work:) that's touching,very pretty! Its okay. I'm not much for rhyming poetry but it seems good. I would however change "over and over again" to " again and again" |