Tell me what you think: "it was you"?

Question:You were my rock,my sword and my shield
you protected me from everything

You understood me when no one else did
you helped me when no one else could

You picked me up when i fell
you stopped the tears as they fell

You were the one i chose to be near
you were always there to calm my fears

You had the key to my heart
you made me open up and let you in
you promised me ill never be alone again

You were my rock,my sword,my shield,my lover,my friend
you were my everything
i owe my heart to you!

**Please tell me what you think.....

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: You were my rock,my sword and my shield
you protected me from everything

You understood me when no one else did
you helped me when no one else could

You picked me up when i fell
you stopped the tears as they fell

You were the one i chose to be near
you were always there to calm my fears

You had the key to my heart
you made me open up and let you in
you promised me ill never be alone again

You were my rock,my sword,my shield,my lover,my friend
you were my everything
i owe my heart to you!

**Please tell me what you think.....

I think it's pretty good.
Some of the rhyme seems forced.
Your lucky to have each other.
Nice work:)

aww this is really cute =)