Is this poem good???

Question:I really don't think it is that amazing... but i got bored so yeah...

The game of life
Yeah, it twists and turns
Nothing's going,
The way it should.

I don't know what to do
And I don't know where to go
But I know if i'm with you
Everything just goes, yeah, it goes good.

I'm so misunderstood, yeah
No one knows who I am.
They think I'm someone else, but deep down i'm not that person

Only you can see
You can see the real me
Cause you understand where I'm going
And you understand where I've been

The game of life
Yeah, it twists and turns
Now everything's going
The way it should

And I just wanted to thank you
For everything you've done
Now everything is going
The way it should
Cause i've got you
And you're the only one.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I really don't think it is that amazing... but i got bored so yeah...

The game of life
Yeah, it twists and turns
Nothing's going,
The way it should.

I don't know what to do
And I don't know where to go
But I know if i'm with you
Everything just goes, yeah, it goes good.

I'm so misunderstood, yeah
No one knows who I am.
They think I'm someone else, but deep down i'm not that person

Only you can see
You can see the real me
Cause you understand where I'm going
And you understand where I've been

The game of life
Yeah, it twists and turns
Now everything's going
The way it should

And I just wanted to thank you
For everything you've done
Now everything is going
The way it should
Cause i've got you
And you're the only one.

i think it is good..it is a poem about you not knowing where you stand at first in the world but you finding that one person who you feel completes you and makes everything make sense.....i like it and think its a very good poem to give to your significant other

I think it's pretty good. 7.5/10

Stop using 'yeah' every other line.

Your wording is bad. Theme is too cliché.

Very nice, simple sweet and clear. The only suggestion I may have is to add more depth. Keep it brief as you have already done, but maybe some stronger feelings, more specific intent.

Could be better. The theme is incredibly typical and cliche, so to make the poem actually seem original, try to spruce up the words a bit. A little bit of metaphors, and better vocab would help.

Kinda sounds like a Hallmark card. But, don't quit on it, just improve it.