I'm back...do you like my new poem?

Question:this is my rated g poem called

bad smells

bad odors
horrible smells
i wonder who opened
this gate to hell
rotten cheese
spoiled milk
smelly breeze
skunk sac sprayed
on silk
this city
bad luck
humid days
garbage truck
lyscol can
makes it go away
spray it around
fresh air is here
to stay

the end

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: this is my rated g poem called

bad smells

bad odors
horrible smells
i wonder who opened
this gate to hell
rotten cheese
spoiled milk
smelly breeze
skunk sac sprayed
on silk
this city
bad luck
humid days
garbage truck
lyscol can
makes it go away
spray it around
fresh air is here
to stay

the end

Fresh air! Here to stay! Yes! Keep spraying, it's good!

well it's okay for what it is, not the most ambitious poem ever written.
keep trying

yeah! Nice!I feel the rhythm. It is very "strong" poem.

REPORTED!!!!!!!

welcome back Frank.

I'm front...I do like your new poem,