1-10 what do you think of my poem ^^ ?

Question:Each new night I welcome without regret
I see the beauty in each new sunset
Even as the icy air rolls in
I know my blood will not run thin
My swollen heart will keep me warm
Through what would be another sullen storm
You're truly in my arms tonight
I'll feel your form and hold you tight
And I know as I go into my sleep
It's our renewal of love that I weep
No more tears of lonely pain
The light you shine now shows again
Though through great gaps we embrace
Knowing you still love me erases this space

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Each new night I welcome without regret
I see the beauty in each new sunset
Even as the icy air rolls in
I know my blood will not run thin
My swollen heart will keep me warm
Through what would be another sullen storm
You're truly in my arms tonight
I'll feel your form and hold you tight
And I know as I go into my sleep
It's our renewal of love that I weep
No more tears of lonely pain
The light you shine now shows again
Though through great gaps we embrace
Knowing you still love me erases this space

If you composed it for a loved one, then I give it a 9. But, if you're trying to become a writer I would have to lower the number substantially...sorry.

IT WAS GREAT BUT THE LAST LINE NEEDS WORK 9/10

Awww.. that sounds sweet. I'm happy to read a poem that makes you think about taking the time to appreciate the little things and to slow down in life.
For those reasons I give it a 9. By the way.. I really like the adjectives you use like "swollen" for the heart.. and the ending is really nice.

8, the only trouble i had with it was the oxymoron in the second to last line confuses me about whether your talking about emotional gaps and physically embracing or something else. And for the third and fourth to last lines 'pain' and 'again' don't rhyme, maybe use something with 'sane'? just a suggestion, but it was a great poem keep writing.

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7 days without soccer makes one weak

9.5

Love it 10/10, great work, continue writing.

Very nice 8/10. Im very critical so that's practically a 10/10.