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Question:this poem doesn't rhyme and thats why its different, jsut like all you others
yahoo answers shows poems that do not
do not rhyme they are
crustaceans? not on my poem
rhyming is too difficult for me
i like poetry that is in liquid form
and cheese
but mostly the liquid poetry
how about cheese poetry?
like this
pepperjack
yes


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: this poem doesn't rhyme and thats why its different, jsut like all you others
yahoo answers shows poems that do not
do not rhyme they are
crustaceans? not on my poem
rhyming is too difficult for me
i like poetry that is in liquid form
and cheese
but mostly the liquid poetry
how about cheese poetry?
like this
pepperjack
yes

Exquisite. You accomplished that which has never before been done under the restraints of rhyme and meter.

Semisoft masterpiece!

it was sort of pointless but ok

makes me hungrey, but im fat so im always hungry

"Liquid poetry." An interesting concept.

kool

Well I knew before I even clicked the link it would suck. Mostly because the question was, "Check dis poem?"
Just didn't strike me as something a real poet would say. Lol. Nice shot though. =]