Please, will you leave mostly positive comments on my colorful poem?

Question:May we drift hazily through desert,
To slip off the crusted cliffs,
Of the Navajo people,
Relishing in native steam.

May we open screen doors.
To greet the yellow air,
That assassinate our neurons,
Whose evil possesses the dogs.

May we descend to pale shores,
To feast on docile cows,
And braised peacock,
While we watch the hanging.

May we hang delicately,
From royal granite ledges,
Into motes filled with eels,
Onto the backs of graceful mares.

We will melt our hair together,
And scatter our ashes as one.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: May we drift hazily through desert,
To slip off the crusted cliffs,
Of the Navajo people,
Relishing in native steam.

May we open screen doors.
To greet the yellow air,
That assassinate our neurons,
Whose evil possesses the dogs.

May we descend to pale shores,
To feast on docile cows,
And braised peacock,
While we watch the hanging.

May we hang delicately,
From royal granite ledges,
Into motes filled with eels,
Onto the backs of graceful mares.

We will melt our hair together,
And scatter our ashes as one.

What`s the matter dragon boy,you can`t handle the truth.
People like you can dish it out but can`t take it. You gave
all the people that answered my questions a thumbs down
Are you a baby? You copied two of my verses. Why do you
have to copy off other people? You need to be kicked off
this site. You are a menace. Go back to mommy and learn
some manners. I`m letting everyone know what kind of person
you are. You will be reported for your actions.

it's hot...i think of yellow and red.

Hmmmmm, I don't really feel connected to this, which doesn't mean that it isn't good, it just means that it probably isn't for me. However, I do believe that you have a talent for putting words together, I guess I just like mine to tell more concrete of a story. However, not my intention to babble about me. Ahem.

I love the phrase "braised peacock." I prefer them that way, when they're braised, they can't make noise and the feathers are beautiful decorations and powerful, at that. And I love the feeling that this is a love story of things to do that defy the imagination and go beyond the borders. That's beautiful. The ending couplet, in my humble opinion, ties the entire thing together beautifully. "We will melt our hair together/And scatter our ashes as one." the idea that you are within that person so dear to you, and that they are part of you is an epic image and one that will not soon fade. Good on you.

It is so beautiful. You are exeptionaly passionate not only about what you write, but how you write. It is so descriptive and makes me feel homey. Very warm and cozzy inside. My god, you have such a beautiful talent. There a few people in this world who have talent like you do, but you have the most unique and wonderful way of writing. Good job my friend. Kepp writing. Oh please. You must keep writing. It gives me joy to read, and I bet the more you write, the more joy you will give to others.

that is very good.