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Question:i know it's sad but i had a really bad day with this guy who i think i might be falling for...

A mark upon your wrist,
A stream of red flowing down the arm.
Scars deep to the bone,
Slashed and locked away from reality.
Broken down by a life of abuse,
They assume it’s an angry father, or an alcoholic mother.
When you show them the scars,
And the eyes that have seen to much, clouded in memories,
Worries take over.
Those so close always think they know what happens,
It could never be the girl with the family that cares,
Kind of,
And yet, she still finds some safety in cutting.
New scars show’s she weak,
Old scars reveal her past.
But even if she stops,
Even if there is no proof she still slices at once was her beautiful flesh,
She is a cutter,
And always will be
Stained red, with no desire to go back.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: i know it's sad but i had a really bad day with this guy who i think i might be falling for...

A mark upon your wrist,
A stream of red flowing down the arm.
Scars deep to the bone,
Slashed and locked away from reality.
Broken down by a life of abuse,
They assume it’s an angry father, or an alcoholic mother.
When you show them the scars,
And the eyes that have seen to much, clouded in memories,
Worries take over.
Those so close always think they know what happens,
It could never be the girl with the family that cares,
Kind of,
And yet, she still finds some safety in cutting.
New scars show’s she weak,
Old scars reveal her past.
But even if she stops,
Even if there is no proof she still slices at once was her beautiful flesh,
She is a cutter,
And always will be
Stained red, with no desire to go back.

your poem is AMAZING. i could sit here and tell you that you should see someone but i no how you feel. well, i only cut a little and only for a little i no how you feel. it might help to talk just dont try to do anything more sever please im sure many people would be DEVISTATED if anything happend to you :-)

i got one for you babe:

roses are red,

violets are blue,

your poems are great but mine...

are better too!! :)

Nice poem!

Wow. Intense. Sad. Depressing.

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honey, it's a beautiful peom...

really sad though....

wanna talk?

full_time_girl@yahoo.com

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i'm hoping that this is just metaphoric!!!

if it isnt'... honey .. you need help... tell someone you can trust.

woah.........

its good but very depressing.....

This is a very deep poem, sad yes. I do hope that if you're really cutting, that you get help for it. Good luck with everything.

It's a start..

It's not bad but it sounds like angry teenage poetry to me. But there are some good parts in there.

i luv it. its dark and depressing you sure no wat ya doin in my opinion

this is very emotional writing but I'm not sure if it's a poem
it singular and inward looking, i can't relate to it without an upstanding of why people self harm, is it a pleasure in pain thing? or is about punishing your self? having read your poem I'm still none the wiser.

Amazing, I love it, I really am captivated by your words, I just hope that your not the cutter you speak of... wanna chat?
email me:
alelovesoreos@yahoo.com