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Question:Can you either rate from 1-10 or give me some comments on this? Note; Its not about a breakup!

I actually loved you,
You could've guessed.
Oh, yet you probably did,
But also knew there was no changing my mind
I don't blame you for not trying again,
Cause that is part of what I wanted.
You were so sweet back then,
I think you still might be
but you're hiding it
Where'd your other side go?
I want the boy who I talked to that other time
Don't act this way, please
I didn't know you well before,
Though enough to not know you anymore!
Your blunt words hurt me,
Speaking as if you just met me,
As if you never felt anything for me
You can't notice yourself, can you?
I won't ever tell you this,
I wish it was easy to say,
You'd take it the wrong way
I want you back
Even the little things that you stopped doing,
I miss seeing them,
Your words were so pleasent to my ears,
Your presence, bringing a smile to face,
I miss the way we used to be.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Can you either rate from 1-10 or give me some comments on this? Note; Its not about a breakup!

I actually loved you,
You could've guessed.
Oh, yet you probably did,
But also knew there was no changing my mind
I don't blame you for not trying again,
Cause that is part of what I wanted.
You were so sweet back then,
I think you still might be
but you're hiding it
Where'd your other side go?
I want the boy who I talked to that other time
Don't act this way, please
I didn't know you well before,
Though enough to not know you anymore!
Your blunt words hurt me,
Speaking as if you just met me,
As if you never felt anything for me
You can't notice yourself, can you?
I won't ever tell you this,
I wish it was easy to say,
You'd take it the wrong way
I want you back
Even the little things that you stopped doing,
I miss seeing them,
Your words were so pleasent to my ears,
Your presence, bringing a smile to face,
I miss the way we used to be.

I totally would rate this a perfect ten.. I know what this feels like... well at least I think I know what your talking about.. tell me if i am right.. You wish you had the same guy you fell inlove with.. like you still have the same guy but hes changed.. the cute little things he did he stopped doing.. the reasons you fell inlove with him are gone because he changed who you used to be.. I know my boyfriend did this anyway.. but hey if I was wrong about what you were talking about.. your poem still touched me and I really like it.. lol

PERFECT TEN!! ;D

i'd say it is a 8 1/2 9 because i dont rate anything a 10 so its really good i loved it