My sad little poem?

Question:It is sad. And it is little. No lie

Hospital:

Frantic pacing, a turning head
Slowly dying in his bed
But in his mind not a worry
He just watches, scurry scurry.

So, what did you think. Did you like it? Did it need some work? Let me see your thoughts.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: It is sad. And it is little. No lie

Hospital:

Frantic pacing, a turning head
Slowly dying in his bed
But in his mind not a worry
He just watches, scurry scurry.

So, what did you think. Did you like it? Did it need some work? Let me see your thoughts.

i liked it. simple but cool.

is it talking about a man whoz on a death bed or sumthing?
its ok