Can anyone help me with my poem of the titan Atlas?

Question:ok so i have a poem down but i think its a little too "pre-school"
it goes like this

Always holds us up the Earth and never lets go
The Titan that created the stars and constellations
Lost to the Gods
As punishment he had to hold the Earth and the Heavens
Shoulders are sore because of the weight

as u see its his name ATLAS, but the thing is that i dont think its enough... can u please add to it or make it sound better but it would REALLY REALLY be appriciated if you make another one (it does not have to be the same type of poem, actually i prefer it not to be)

THANKS TO ANYONE WHO ANSWERS

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: ok so i have a poem down but i think its a little too "pre-school"
it goes like this

Always holds us up the Earth and never lets go
The Titan that created the stars and constellations
Lost to the Gods
As punishment he had to hold the Earth and the Heavens
Shoulders are sore because of the weight

as u see its his name ATLAS, but the thing is that i dont think its enough... can u please add to it or make it sound better but it would REALLY REALLY be appriciated if you make another one (it does not have to be the same type of poem, actually i prefer it not to be)

THANKS TO ANYONE WHO ANSWERS

Try this, free verse. Rework it to make it your own.

The man asks not
for Gods have judged
His role reversed
from skyward realms
Penance for past undones.
Shoulder he the weight of skies
shoulder he the weight of earth
the world shall know him now,
A Titan? Men call him... Atlas