Feeling down, need to vent.?

Question:"You Haunt Me"

Behind those hands you touched me with, a guilty conscience lied. No matter how much you covered it up those feelings you were unable to hide.
Under those covers you broke me down, I grew Dependant on you I bet you felt proud.

You found someone with no voice of there own, someone so innocent, I was eight years old.
For years you made me think that I could trust what I was being told, you said you would never hurt me. I thought you had a heart of gold.

When I was wise enough, to see the lies you fed to me. I let everyone know the pain you had caused me.
You took all I had, and that just wasn't enough. You couldn't even admit to it, why couldn't you just fess up?

You tore me apart once more, you left no tracks behind.
Everyone was fooled by your deception, but only I was hurt by your lies.

I prayed that one day everyone would see through your trickery, the evidence against you was undeniable you see.
My day of justice never came, before you passed away did you ever feel ashamed?

I just wanted an apology, but that was to much it seems.
It wasn't enough you took my life away, now you haunt me in my dreams.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: "You Haunt Me"

Behind those hands you touched me with, a guilty conscience lied. No matter how much you covered it up those feelings you were unable to hide.
Under those covers you broke me down, I grew Dependant on you I bet you felt proud.

You found someone with no voice of there own, someone so innocent, I was eight years old.
For years you made me think that I could trust what I was being told, you said you would never hurt me. I thought you had a heart of gold.

When I was wise enough, to see the lies you fed to me. I let everyone know the pain you had caused me.
You took all I had, and that just wasn't enough. You couldn't even admit to it, why couldn't you just fess up?

You tore me apart once more, you left no tracks behind.
Everyone was fooled by your deception, but only I was hurt by your lies.

I prayed that one day everyone would see through your trickery, the evidence against you was undeniable you see.
My day of justice never came, before you passed away did you ever feel ashamed?

I just wanted an apology, but that was to much it seems.
It wasn't enough you took my life away, now you haunt me in my dreams.

I'm so sorry this happened to you. I can't say if it's good or bad because I feel like this is very personal to you. These are your feelings and they can't be rated. I hope you find peace sometime.

nice poem

it is good...i felt the feeling of desperations......and a sense of wasted oppurtunity...it is very good..

Who ever you are, you may need to forgive the person who did this to you. Forgivenes simply means, you need not hold a grudge against that person. O.K. It is difficult but not impossible. For what life are you living despite the person dead and gone? You do not want that person to take the joy from your life away, do you?So in your mind, just let that person go, do not withhold the soul.
Forgiveness is very powerful and unforgiveness too.They both have the power to hold the soul of a human being or to let go.Yet people say Christ hanged helplessly from the Cross.The choice is yours.

hello,
have never read such a heartfelt poem before. it must have taken great courage to write this.
! peace be with you !
!!!bye!!!