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Position:Home>Poetry> The last poem about the elemental sisters... What do you think?Question:Spier Held within the glass She shares each sister’s heart All they Create her In the mind and dreams Thought births her In human form But she is transcendent Unbroken Transient Felt when awe is present Strengthened When wisdom is heeded She is Spier And is present Dwelling in each Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Spier Held within the glass She shares each sister’s heart All they Create her In the mind and dreams Thought births her In human form But she is transcendent Unbroken Transient Felt when awe is present Strengthened When wisdom is heeded She is Spier And is present Dwelling in each I read all. My compliments, well written. This poem really connects with me, because I have often believed that spirit is the combination of the elements, but she is also what created them. Without her they are nothing, with her they are far more powerful than they are alone, or simply by the four of them. Unity, power, passion, cohesion, all of this things are with and within her, beautiful beyond design. Spier...the lover of the earth and the earth, within the earth and above her. i dint really get it like held within the glass?? This is my favorite, besides water... but this has a little of all the elements within it... I guess that is the point. True to form Rouxe, true to form... these are the poems i like best of yours.... I think you realy feel... and that is what makes them so intense..... they draw people in and make them think... all things are a part of us all...we are all part of the whole.... by that we are all better than we are alone.....and we are all less important than self.... As my spirit moves with hers I feel them all in me But in a time of death and pain oft we cannot see |