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Question:While we last, through this silent time
I look forward to your eyes
Embracing darkness, this is us
But I have forgotten how to embrace anything
But black nothing
Bleak bride to be
But nothing to join at the altar
So instead
I still kneel there
Our lives never were meant for the front page
And our hearts
Never for the world to see
But we are
Still in this together
The candles around the tub
Begin to burn down
Our secret places will burn
But secret
Is all
And we are nothing more
Then in love
No spells attached


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: While we last, through this silent time
I look forward to your eyes
Embracing darkness, this is us
But I have forgotten how to embrace anything
But black nothing
Bleak bride to be
But nothing to join at the altar
So instead
I still kneel there
Our lives never were meant for the front page
And our hearts
Never for the world to see
But we are
Still in this together
The candles around the tub
Begin to burn down
Our secret places will burn
But secret
Is all
And we are nothing more
Then in love
No spells attached

Embracing darkness,
embracing me,
goddess of my
fantasy?
I will never
hide from you
know this, know
that it is true.

I will burn
with true desire,
you my match, this love
our pyre.
You enchant me
with no spell,
a coin tossed
in a wishing well...

can we last forever?

I love how you glide and guide me through your world... I will ever be on the lookout for more from Siren!

It is a shame there aren't many reading this, they are missing out on something of beauty!

I love this, especially the last lines!