What so think about this poem?

Question:what do u thnk of this poem?
i know what i am doing.
by erika douglas

why am i doing this?
i sit and wait on u.
why am i doing this?
but you are out sleeping with stan or drew.
why am i doing this?
im done with this bull.
why am i doing this?
without u, im not full.
why am i doing this?
i wanna put a ring on ur left finger.
why am i doing this?
damn, why so my feelings have to linger?
why am i doing this?
y cant i be your one and only?
why am i doing this?
why does all this hurt me?
i know what i am doing.
tryin to hold on.
i kow what im doing.
lettin u go im done.

honest feed back i wanna kno ur opinons before i enter this.

thanxs

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: what do u thnk of this poem?
i know what i am doing.
by erika douglas

why am i doing this?
i sit and wait on u.
why am i doing this?
but you are out sleeping with stan or drew.
why am i doing this?
im done with this bull.
why am i doing this?
without u, im not full.
why am i doing this?
i wanna put a ring on ur left finger.
why am i doing this?
damn, why so my feelings have to linger?
why am i doing this?
y cant i be your one and only?
why am i doing this?
why does all this hurt me?
i know what i am doing.
tryin to hold on.
i kow what im doing.
lettin u go im done.

honest feed back i wanna kno ur opinons before i enter this.

thanxs

I think instead of why am i doing this after each line, do it at the end of a stanza (do a few lines then ask... why?)

why am i doing this?
i sit and wait on u.
but you are out sleeping with stan or drew.
why am i doing this?

why am i doing this?
im done with this bull
without u, im not full.
why am i doing this?

why am i doing this?
i wanna put a ring on ur left finger
damn, why do my feelings have to linger?
why am i doing this?

why am i doing this?
y cant i be your one and only
why does all this hurt me?
why am i doing this?

i know what i am doing.
tryin to hold on.
lettin u go im done.
i know what i am doing.

You look like an idiot waiting like this.
Go out find some body else who more receptive to your desires. Like this you may become a spinster, an old spinster whom nobody will desire.