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Question:Exquisite Beauty

On a mountain I once was,
A field of wild flowers I came across.
In the middle, one red and one yellow,
Two roses entwined, they stood wild and free.

With drops of dew on each blossom,
One after the other, they fell.
Just like tears,
Each landed with such elegance.

A sparkling glow from every dew drop,
Each one enchanted the next.
To my left,
I saw a distant silhouette.

An angel standing next to a unicorn,
Together, their beauty glistened.
Wild and with freedom,
Beauty flowed with the sparkle from the roses.

To my right,
I saw you, a tear in each eye.
Like a rainbow above,
Your tears encompassed all.

An exquisite vision of rarity,
You were witnessing the same.
Exquisite beauty,
Has been captured and returned.

The truth, I just had to wonder,
Did you even realize the depths of sight?
Within the sparkle of your eyes,
You just saw the beauty hidden deep within your heart and soul.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Exquisite Beauty

On a mountain I once was,
A field of wild flowers I came across.
In the middle, one red and one yellow,
Two roses entwined, they stood wild and free.

With drops of dew on each blossom,
One after the other, they fell.
Just like tears,
Each landed with such elegance.

A sparkling glow from every dew drop,
Each one enchanted the next.
To my left,
I saw a distant silhouette.

An angel standing next to a unicorn,
Together, their beauty glistened.
Wild and with freedom,
Beauty flowed with the sparkle from the roses.

To my right,
I saw you, a tear in each eye.
Like a rainbow above,
Your tears encompassed all.

An exquisite vision of rarity,
You were witnessing the same.
Exquisite beauty,
Has been captured and returned.

The truth, I just had to wonder,
Did you even realize the depths of sight?
Within the sparkle of your eyes,
You just saw the beauty hidden deep within your heart and soul.

?

Ohhhh, sasi just didn't take the time. I love our mystical vision, this fairyland that you enter into. There is something about the two roses, the red and the yellow that speaks to me. Perhaps the paths that we take. Red, the color of passion, Yellow the color of cowardice. But perhaps I read too much into it. I love the vision, as well, of the unicorn and the angel, two mythic creatures that do not necessarily belong in this world but they were wild and free.

And the one with the glistening eyes. For some reason, I see a mirror and the person seeing themselves for the first time realizing their inherent clairvoyance, their connectedness with this world of wild creatures and rose scented freedoms and finally the realization of who the speaker truly is. "You just saw the beauty hidden deep within your heart and soul."

Ohhhhhhhhhhh tooooooo long and difficult to understand

Dreadful first line, really bad. In fairness it doesn't get any worse but what's with the copyright, you don't really think anyone will plagiarise it, do you?

Once again you have out done yourself on an exquisitely written piece of work!! I really enjoy reading your pieces.

That is a really great poem! I could see what you was descibing, really well done.

Check out my new poem if you wish.

http://www.mypoetryshared.co.uk/aprilfoo...

Its a funny one not a deep one like yours. I was in a fun mood today and I wrote it in an hour.

Wow, I like this one a lot.
I love your imagery.
Very nice work:)