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Position:Home>Poetry> Help with metaphor poem!?Question:I need help with making an extended metaphor poem. Info: It has to be 8 lines It has to be compared to a non-living thing to an animal. No too complex-words please! NB: This is NOT homework help. I need an idea of what a good extended metaphor is. GOOD LUCK! Thanks for all that help! Even ideas of the non living thing and animal it is being compared to will help lots! Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I need help with making an extended metaphor poem. Info: It has to be 8 lines It has to be compared to a non-living thing to an animal. No too complex-words please! NB: This is NOT homework help. I need an idea of what a good extended metaphor is. GOOD LUCK! Thanks for all that help! Even ideas of the non living thing and animal it is being compared to will help lots! This is an example (on the fly); I have maintained the metaphor that the wind is a lion. Then I have described what the lion has accomplished by its tearing and slamming trees into the house, with the metaphor of claws. ~~~~ The wind is a roaring lion whose teeth gnash the trees and yank them from the ground with the strongest jaws in the jungle. The door is closed and locked, but its claws make deep gashes in the wood and tree trunks slam into the door and rake the oak. ~~~~ Victoria Tarrani ((c) 08.04.02) aka Tori |