This is a quickly written poem just to see if I still had the ability to write p

Question:I just don't have it inside me,
To dive so deep into me.
To find what's left of me,
And see the pieces you left of me.

Leave my heart.
Leave my head.
Leave my memory.
Leave the rest of me.

I just don't have it in me,
To give anymore to you.
Leave me now.
Allow peace to be with me.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I just don't have it inside me,
To dive so deep into me.
To find what's left of me,
And see the pieces you left of me.

Leave my heart.
Leave my head.
Leave my memory.
Leave the rest of me.

I just don't have it in me,
To give anymore to you.
Leave me now.
Allow peace to be with me.

wow, its really good. well done : )

It's good

Seven of your 12 lines end in the same word "me" which, to me, is too repetitive and distracting to what you are trying to say.

Try working on this a bit longer to see how you can streamline and get to the 'meat' of this piece. I'm betting you can do better than this and the piece itself will be much better for it.