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Position:Home>Poetry> Now what do you think?Question:I had a previous question where I asked everyone to give me a theme and i would quickly write a short poem about it. below I will put the poems (the title is the theme I was given) what do you think of my results. 30 + starting college Today, I sit, I begin. 30 years of looking in, finally, I can start off new opportunities are too few Today is just another day I will work hard, and find my way Tomorrow is brighter now I'm getting my degree, somehow Drunk Men Silly, laughing, slapping asses noisy, stubborn, clashing glasses hooting calling, falling down every night, like a clown blackouts, sickness, blackmail photos, couches, cars, swimming holes, drunken stupor, I'm a fan boy is't great to be a drunk man. Dusty Bunnies roll, roll, scitter scatter, bounce, bounce, pitter patter come here you, my vaccuum's hungry eat little one, the carrots yummy All clean and gone, no more sneezing, All fat and warm fur, no more freezing Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I had a previous question where I asked everyone to give me a theme and i would quickly write a short poem about it. below I will put the poems (the title is the theme I was given) what do you think of my results. 30 + starting college Today, I sit, I begin. 30 years of looking in, finally, I can start off new opportunities are too few Today is just another day I will work hard, and find my way Tomorrow is brighter now I'm getting my degree, somehow Drunk Men Silly, laughing, slapping asses noisy, stubborn, clashing glasses hooting calling, falling down every night, like a clown blackouts, sickness, blackmail photos, couches, cars, swimming holes, drunken stupor, I'm a fan boy is't great to be a drunk man. Dusty Bunnies roll, roll, scitter scatter, bounce, bounce, pitter patter come here you, my vaccuum's hungry eat little one, the carrots yummy All clean and gone, no more sneezing, All fat and warm fur, no more freezing I enjoyed them all. Very nice. You need to travel more. it was ok |