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Question:It's like looking from inside of a mirror
How is it the outside if you're locked in?
I'm only a reflection
Of what I used to be

I pound the glass
With fists made of images
Sound, pain, light - LIFE
Don't exist here
Only reflections

No tim, no space, no thought
No air
Truth is a Lie
Birth is my Death
So here is where
We take our final

Breath


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: It's like looking from inside of a mirror
How is it the outside if you're locked in?
I'm only a reflection
Of what I used to be

I pound the glass
With fists made of images
Sound, pain, light - LIFE
Don't exist here
Only reflections

No tim, no space, no thought
No air
Truth is a Lie
Birth is my Death
So here is where
We take our final

Breath

Sorry...I was bored. I'm sure there is more to you than what I read a face value here. But, you asked. Perhaps if I had enough will to copy/paste this poem into a word document for a day I might feel as you do...I would call you genius. Until then...try to get into the picture (or mirror more).

MIRROR_RORRIM

Is it my mind or the mirror that lies?
I do not recognize the eyes looking back at me.

I reach out to see if the imposter will match my will
But IT reaches for me to question if I'm real.

Is the light in that room slightly darker
Or is my room brightly lit in denial?

My nose is to the glass daring the other to reason
IT is unwavering outside my cell, setenced for treason

by Aaron _2008

I really like it.
Nice work:)

very nice...? poetry

Amazing my dear. Nice work!

ok someone already posted this poem i dont know if it was u but still its kinda wrong 2 have 2 of the same poem up.