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Position:Home>Poetry> Poem...what are your thoughts?Question:It's like looking from inside of a mirror How is it the outside if you're locked in? I'm only a reflection Of what I used to be I pound the glass With fists made of images Sound, pain, light - LIFE Don't exist here Only reflections No tim, no space, no thought No air Truth is a Lie Birth is my Death So here is where We take our final Breath Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: It's like looking from inside of a mirror How is it the outside if you're locked in? I'm only a reflection Of what I used to be I pound the glass With fists made of images Sound, pain, light - LIFE Don't exist here Only reflections No tim, no space, no thought No air Truth is a Lie Birth is my Death So here is where We take our final Breath Sorry...I was bored. I'm sure there is more to you than what I read a face value here. But, you asked. Perhaps if I had enough will to copy/paste this poem into a word document for a day I might feel as you do...I would call you genius. Until then...try to get into the picture (or mirror more). MIRROR_RORRIM Is it my mind or the mirror that lies? I do not recognize the eyes looking back at me. I reach out to see if the imposter will match my will But IT reaches for me to question if I'm real. Is the light in that room slightly darker Or is my room brightly lit in denial? My nose is to the glass daring the other to reason IT is unwavering outside my cell, setenced for treason by Aaron _2008 I really like it. Nice work:) very nice...? poetry Amazing my dear. Nice work! ok someone already posted this poem i dont know if it was u but still its kinda wrong 2 have 2 of the same poem up. |