My poem? do u like it? will u grade it plz!?

Question:here is my poem:

I’LL FIND A NEW LOVE
As I gaze
Upon the fish,
I remember
My only wish.
As they swim
To and fro,
I think about
Your radiant glow.
The way you laughed
At all my jokes;
Fighting back tears,
I try not to choke.
This aquarium
Holds so many memories;
From the sharks
To the sea anemones.
My open hand
Against the cool glass case,
Longing for your warm embrace.
And as I sit here,
All alone,
I think about how
You didn’t answer your phone.
Now I realize
I should make a choice:
To wait so long
To hear your voice,
Or to go and find
A different path;
Find a new love.
You do the math.
I’m leaving you;
Once and for all.
I probably
Won’t even call.
I’ll forget you
Like you forgot me.
I’ll find a new love,
Just wait and see.

i adore poetry so what do u think about this poem??

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: here is my poem:

I’LL FIND A NEW LOVE
As I gaze
Upon the fish,
I remember
My only wish.
As they swim
To and fro,
I think about
Your radiant glow.
The way you laughed
At all my jokes;
Fighting back tears,
I try not to choke.
This aquarium
Holds so many memories;
From the sharks
To the sea anemones.
My open hand
Against the cool glass case,
Longing for your warm embrace.
And as I sit here,
All alone,
I think about how
You didn’t answer your phone.
Now I realize
I should make a choice:
To wait so long
To hear your voice,
Or to go and find
A different path;
Find a new love.
You do the math.
I’m leaving you;
Once and for all.
I probably
Won’t even call.
I’ll forget you
Like you forgot me.
I’ll find a new love,
Just wait and see.

i adore poetry so what do u think about this poem??

This was really good. The rhyme is consistent, rhythmic, and I really enjoyed it. You also have some really good lines in there and thoughts, imagery as well. There are a few things, however: I would shorten the poem and end it at "You do the math." as I think the rest of the lines, particularly the very last, are weak compared to the rest of the poem and so reduce its impact. Other than that, this was a great read, thanks.

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its beautiful i give it an A plus

10 being the highest one lowest...
I'd say 12!!

This is really good. Definitely 500 times better than i could do Five stars

A+! I like it!

I think it's pretty good.
I agree with the one who said to end it at "you do the math".
Nice:)