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Position:Home>Poetry> Temptation of a last second... and yet I give in for you all... Will you lend anQuestion:Goddess of my fornication Sweet How is it that we came to meet? To think beyond What I have felt You are the altar Where I have knelt Redemption Damnation I find you to be I never knew What you see in me Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Goddess of my fornication Sweet How is it that we came to meet? To think beyond What I have felt You are the altar Where I have knelt Redemption Damnation I find you to be I never knew What you see in me I feel so...unworthy. I hope that it is only the redemption that you seek out, for in all things are the possibility for good or for ill and I would wish nothing on you that is undeserved. What I see in you is this, spontaneity, informality, fearlessness, improvisation. Let it flow, Siren, sing your entrancing dark song... It is entirly beautiful, both in its simplicity and depth. I love the style in which you wrote it! it is similar to some of my poetry. I just posted one, check it out! This is Eva to many... you have it bad don't you? I am impressed... first thought was it's not your best but then I read it again and really liked it. |