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Question:Goddess of my fornication
Sweet
How is it that we came to meet?
To think beyond
What I have felt
You are the altar
Where I have knelt
Redemption
Damnation
I find you to be
I never knew
What you see in me


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Goddess of my fornication
Sweet
How is it that we came to meet?
To think beyond
What I have felt
You are the altar
Where I have knelt
Redemption
Damnation
I find you to be
I never knew
What you see in me

I feel so...unworthy. I hope that it is only the redemption that you seek out, for in all things are the possibility for good or for ill and I would wish nothing on you that is undeserved. What I see in you is this, spontaneity, informality, fearlessness, improvisation. Let it flow, Siren, sing your entrancing dark song...

It is entirly beautiful, both in its simplicity and depth. I love the style in which you wrote it! it is similar to some of my poetry. I just posted one, check it out!

This is Eva to many... you have it bad don't you?

I am impressed... first thought was it's not your best but then I read it again and really liked it.