What do you notice about this rhyme?

Question:Look carefully

Always bucking, causing dummies enough fun/ Getting heated, insane, just killing loads, many numb/ Over peace, quick riding souls, to understand vicious woes, x-rated, yo's zero/

Look carefully at it and tell me if you notice what i did.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Look carefully

Always bucking, causing dummies enough fun/ Getting heated, insane, just killing loads, many numb/ Over peace, quick riding souls, to understand vicious woes, x-rated, yo's zero/

Look carefully at it and tell me if you notice what i did.

Very good!!! You did the words in alphabetical order!!!! Not bad for doing that my friend... props to you!

you put slashes in it?

F'n zero.

That's what immediately jumped out to me. The "F'n zero." That, and another thing I'll keep to myself coz I'm sure it's not what you're asking about.

made a bad poem?

Um - it doesn't?

the words are in alphabet order a-always b-bucking etc

A bit confusing, don't entirely forget grammar. Have I just killed long minutes needing portions quickly re-written? See to understanding; verbage will x-out your zazen.

:)

alphabetical order!!