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Question:What is the problem with society?
I want the pain to stop because it’s killing me
There’s no solution that I can see
If I went away would you think of me?

What would happen if my life could end?
Thoughts and depression driving me round the bend
Maybe no one would remember me?
Lets end this life and then we’ll see

My hearts torn in half and I start to cry
Will there be depression where I go when I die?
I look around tears falling from my eye
I find the scissors and I give it a try

What would happen if my life could end?
Thoughts and depression driving me round the bend
Theres no point in anyone remembering me
Ill end this life and let my soul fly free

My wrist is cut, I begin to bleed
I get the feeling that I always need
My eyes are black and my gloves are on
But then I faint them my life is gone

What would happen if my life could end?
Thoughts and depression driving me round the bend
When I die dont remember me
ill end this life and then we all shall se


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: What is the problem with society?
I want the pain to stop because it’s killing me
There’s no solution that I can see
If I went away would you think of me?

What would happen if my life could end?
Thoughts and depression driving me round the bend
Maybe no one would remember me?
Lets end this life and then we’ll see

My hearts torn in half and I start to cry
Will there be depression where I go when I die?
I look around tears falling from my eye
I find the scissors and I give it a try

What would happen if my life could end?
Thoughts and depression driving me round the bend
Theres no point in anyone remembering me
Ill end this life and let my soul fly free

My wrist is cut, I begin to bleed
I get the feeling that I always need
My eyes are black and my gloves are on
But then I faint them my life is gone

What would happen if my life could end?
Thoughts and depression driving me round the bend
When I die dont remember me
ill end this life and then we all shall se

I think it's ok.
Some lines just don't seem to fit.
It's also quite cliche'.
Nice:)

thanks for the lyrics!

i like it