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Question:Wish you were here
Whispering in my ear.
I love you,
You know its true.
Kissing you against the car
Looking up at the stars.
Hold on to me, its okay
We’ll make it through another day.
When I see you its so right
Let’s be together until the night
And when you’re gone
I sing your song
Everything seems so wrong.
Lets get through this together
And everything will be better.

I don't know what else to put.. please feel free to suggest some more lines. But I heard the shorter the better. Thanks

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Wish you were here
Whispering in my ear.
I love you,
You know its true.
Kissing you against the car
Looking up at the stars.
Hold on to me, its okay
We’ll make it through another day.
When I see you its so right
Let’s be together until the night
And when you’re gone
I sing your song
Everything seems so wrong.
Lets get through this together
And everything will be better.

I don't know what else to put.. please feel free to suggest some more lines. But I heard the shorter the better. Thanks

take everything seems so wrong out....it's cute.

i like it but what is wrong on the line
"everything seems so wrong"

i say the longer the better.

Wish you were here
Whispering in my ear.
I love you,
You know its true.
Kissing you against the car
Looking up at the stars.
Hold on to me, its okay
We’ll make it through another day.
When I see you its so right
Let’s be together until the night
And when you’re gone
I sing your song
Lets get through this together
And everything will be better.
We willl run into the night,
never forgetting our past, and looking towards our future.
even if were followed by the screams
and all the confusion,
we will no we were right
don't let go
hold on
grasping me tightly,
never say goodbye
i love you
you don't have to love me,
just accept my love

i don't know if you like it, but i added a few lines. have fun (remember, poems don't have to rhyme.)

shorter aint better.
i like the longer ones.
i like it.
maybe increase vocabulary.

i think it is very nice and beautiful

i like it but yeah take out everything seems so wrong