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The low thrum of the computer keeps me company-
It is the sound of my electric blood as my soul is poured into a silicon mold
of amazing durability. I’m getting old,
but spun with fibers the tensile strength of spiders on LSD,
I know my way around the circuitry,
pulsing thru your motherboard and into your
PC.


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The low thrum of the computer keeps me company-
It is the sound of my electric blood as my soul is poured into a silicon mold
of amazing durability. I’m getting old,
but spun with fibers the tensile strength of spiders on LSD,
I know my way around the circuitry,
pulsing thru your motherboard and into your
PC.

not bad. interesting meter/rhyme scheme. i like the imagery.

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  • Watt do I think? It amperes that the poem galvanizes me to respond. Although it is set in a time that is faraday from our current lives, I now find no resistance to plugging into its timeless truths. I was alternating, but the words really hit ohm. Is that wire asking?

    I second Maya. Great imagery. I could really feel the poem. Nice job:))))