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Position:Home>Poetry> Check this poem out !!!! my friend wrote i... what do u think!!!?Question:this is my friends poem what do u think Title: What would you do...? What would you do...? What would you do if I was mad.....? What would you do if I was sad....? What would you do if I was crying in the rain....? What would you do if I was broken from the pain while everyone else walked past.....? I know what I would do..... I would hug you until you calmed down..... I would grip you tight and act stupid until u smiled again..... I would hug you in the rain and not move an inch till the tears went away I would put your head on my lap and keep u safe from the pain while everyone stared..... And most of all if someone was about to shoot in the chest i would protect u and eat the bullet..... What would u do for someone u care about...... tell me and him what u think .... Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: this is my friends poem what do u think Title: What would you do...? What would you do...? What would you do if I was mad.....? What would you do if I was sad....? What would you do if I was crying in the rain....? What would you do if I was broken from the pain while everyone else walked past.....? I know what I would do..... I would hug you until you calmed down..... I would grip you tight and act stupid until u smiled again..... I would hug you in the rain and not move an inch till the tears went away I would put your head on my lap and keep u safe from the pain while everyone stared..... And most of all if someone was about to shoot in the chest i would protect u and eat the bullet..... What would u do for someone u care about...... tell me and him what u think .... this poem shows sincerity but the phrase "...eat the bullet..." is funny. it was okay. creative No structure, no real feel of emotion, even though the words are supposed to instill emotions. All and all it just wasn't very creative. Sorry to sound mean, but you asked. eating the bullet?????? is that a saying?...or something...??? Honestly I don't like it at all....sorry. I don't like it at all....sry. |