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Question:So tell me...
When you want to kiss her,
Which part of you is desiring it?
Does it come from your body?
Or is the desire burning in your heart?

Because last I knew,
I had your heart,
And you had mine.
Or at least...
That's what I thought it meant
When you say I love you
And I say I love you too.

Just remember that
When you are holding her hand;
In your other hand,
You are holding my heart.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: So tell me...
When you want to kiss her,
Which part of you is desiring it?
Does it come from your body?
Or is the desire burning in your heart?

Because last I knew,
I had your heart,
And you had mine.
Or at least...
That's what I thought it meant
When you say I love you
And I say I love you too.

Just remember that
When you are holding her hand;
In your other hand,
You are holding my heart.

I thought it was really beautiful. Especially the last couple of lines, it's a really sad but beautiul image. Well done and keep writing!!

wow the last couple of lines are truly amazing...nice work!

Keep listening to those urges!