A Haiku Day - "Life" - Do You Like?

Question:The red ball bounces
Into a puddle, pausing,
Then bounces again

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: The red ball bounces
Into a puddle, pausing,
Then bounces again

Excellent, one could just see the ball frozen in the water before it sailed up and away. This is a winner.

Love it!

Now I've got mud on me...I might as well jump in the puddle too...

haha love it

Indeed I do! Had an instant vision of the puddle and all!
(Wondering how many times in my youth...did I do just that!)
Hugs!

I always hated when I'd play ball and it goes into the water. Nice Haiku.

I like it but would like a little more please.

A beautiful image of life and its ups and downs.

Very much like life, and so succintly stated. I would try Haiku, but I'm terrible with syllables, people will vouch for me on that one. But this, life bounces, hits a rough spot, then goes on. Beautiful and simplistic, just the way I like it. Solid 100.

Short and sweet. The imagery was very strong, I loved it!