My poem the darkest woods it is dark .Not for under 16?

Question:There i was in the dark
howling woods sounds of laughter
filled the air.

All i seen were shadows in shiny black
with blood and sulfur
seeping from the sacks

I thought i was dreaming with
all the screaming
from the coffins in the woods.

They were sing they were screaming
chants from long ago
They were wild as they danced
around the lady in the trance

For the next dance of death.
as she was for the next sacrifice

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: There i was in the dark
howling woods sounds of laughter
filled the air.

All i seen were shadows in shiny black
with blood and sulfur
seeping from the sacks

I thought i was dreaming with
all the screaming
from the coffins in the woods.

They were sing they were screaming
chants from long ago
They were wild as they danced
around the lady in the trance

For the next dance of death.
as she was for the next sacrifice

Excellent, to tell us how you are suffering the lonely nights in an amazing way.
Good Luck!!!

creepy.

Your final draft would be better written by steel pen or goose quill dipped in milk upon the best white bond. Then, once a
worthy reader fondles your work, let the heat of open flames flickering up under poem suddenly reveal secret lines. Find
rebirth like the Phoenix.

I really liked this and this may be the best ever.It is dark and i like how you put no one under 16 good shot..

very good, flowing and
scary. but the poem had
rhythm.
laney

Dear Sherry,Thought is good and u have maintained it but still flying with negative thinking,Pl.,change to positive.

Is it the shadows of your mind, or the deep desire of unprovided curiousity...is it the hollowed feelings left empty from past, dashed hopes, or imagination left over from some half discarded dream...is it the attempt to drive someone else's heart to places they dare not tread, or possibly to fullfil a necessary dread. A story, a poem, a page torn from a book of forbidden troubles...whatever the source, it matters not, for it is what you chose to endure.

bravo
truly the best ever

Yes, it's pretty dark.

I loved your poem so much it was off the hook.your getting to be a great writer with time .peace .friend. Sharon

Very nice sherry ' you did a great job.lots of luck with life...Chris.