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Position:Home>Poetry> Hai' ku, Low' ku, No' ku's just fine for me. Is it ku?Question:***** Angry little clouds Springtime showers moistening Azaleas on fire ***** Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: ***** Angry little clouds Springtime showers moistening Azaleas on fire ***** Yes......It is ku and...Thankyou Well Done TD...well done.....and every time you come around with some difference! and that's what make TD special...... Oh, thank you! I so miss my lovely Azaleas! Ku...it is! I have no idea what you mean. I know "ku" is 9 in Japanese if that helps! LOL.. Totally ku! This was wonderful. I miss Azaleas too, my heart goes out to Bayard Lady. ku Very ku. I love the contrast between the "angry little clouds" and the "azaleas on fire"; they're opposites (if you take them literally, I mean), but they are interrelated with your wording. We need to call Doctor Elys in for a learned opinion on ku or nu or Hai' whatever. In the interim, I will go on record as saying it is an excellent KU. Glad you've joined this Haiku day. It's oku with me. Lovely and kute. It's K-me.... The spring time showers are doing more than moistening 'round here today. It's downright SOGGY! Yes, it is Ku...time of year, nature, contradiction/complement of showers moistening.....fire of flowers. One teensy thing in the last line....azaleas is a four count....OOOOPPPPSSS!!!!!!!! Back in the pine forest.......gnats, drats, hmmmph!!!! |