What do u think of this poem???????????????????

Question:my friend wrote this off the top of her head what do u think i think its good.

title:On the edge I stand

I'm standing on the edge and no one seems to care.

I am ready to jump but no one will look.

Will I be missed when I am gone for forgeten like the wind that will whip through my hair?

Can I let myself go and leave this world?

Will he stand me up as I sit by the edge and perpare to jump?

Will he let me cry on his shoulder?

Will stop me when I stand to jump?

Will he let me tell him how I feel about life?

He should know that I love him more than my life

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: my friend wrote this off the top of her head what do u think i think its good.

title:On the edge I stand

I'm standing on the edge and no one seems to care.

I am ready to jump but no one will look.

Will I be missed when I am gone for forgeten like the wind that will whip through my hair?

Can I let myself go and leave this world?

Will he stand me up as I sit by the edge and perpare to jump?

Will he let me cry on his shoulder?

Will stop me when I stand to jump?

Will he let me tell him how I feel about life?

He should know that I love him more than my life

Aww... I think that's a really sweet poem :)
Anything that comes straight from the heart is pure and true, I don't think anyone has the right to criticize.

much love,
maya

It sounds like your friend may be crying out for help and is possibily sucidial. You should show this to an adult and be their for her.

How is your friend acting? Is he acting sad? This is a really sad poem. I would worry if this was how he felt.

I ALSO WRITE POEMS AND THIS IS THE KINDA OF POEM THAT I WOULD WRITE SO YEAH I THINK THAT IT'S VERY GOOD