What do u think of this poem ???

Question:my girl friend wrote this for me what do u think?

Title: What will you do?

What willl you do when time finaly brakes me?

What will you do when I give up?

What will you do when I fall and dont rise?

What will you do when I die in your embare with a smile on my face and love in my eyes for you and you alone?

What will you do when i die and leave you lost and alone with a broken heart?

Will you hold me tight till im alright?

Will you stay with me till i stand and fight again?

Will you stay with me till i stand and fight again?

Will you hold me and smile back while telling me it's alright till I'm gone?

Will you blame me for leaving and curse my name and soul than move on and forget me?

Or will you remmember me and keep me in your heart till you may come and join me in our peace?

I would do of these things for you excpet blame, curse, and forget you.

Would you do the same for me?

Because I love you I wish to be there for you.

Do you feel the same?

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: my girl friend wrote this for me what do u think?

Title: What will you do?

What willl you do when time finaly brakes me?

What will you do when I give up?

What will you do when I fall and dont rise?

What will you do when I die in your embare with a smile on my face and love in my eyes for you and you alone?

What will you do when i die and leave you lost and alone with a broken heart?

Will you hold me tight till im alright?

Will you stay with me till i stand and fight again?

Will you stay with me till i stand and fight again?

Will you hold me and smile back while telling me it's alright till I'm gone?

Will you blame me for leaving and curse my name and soul than move on and forget me?

Or will you remmember me and keep me in your heart till you may come and join me in our peace?

I would do of these things for you excpet blame, curse, and forget you.

Would you do the same for me?

Because I love you I wish to be there for you.

Do you feel the same?

WOW! I really liked it. I almost cried. That was really good in my opinion.

impressive

I like it a lot!

is she sick or some thing its a good poem but it sounds like she is not in good health and like she is saying good bye.

This is a really great poem and she is a great poet .really an 10 out of 10.

It sounds like a good-bye poem. I hope that these were just nervous spelling mistakes and not for real. I think it's good in a sad sort of way.

That is a great poem and i really loved it.