My poems??

Question:i am interested in poetry and wood like to kno of any poems u've ritten or ur favorite poem. also, do you like mine? here it is: 'Above the Birds'
Above the trees,
Above the clouds.
Listening
To nature's sounds.
Rolling feilds
Of green and brown
Streaked across
The far-below ground.
Roads that turn,
Rivers that twist.
So many colors,
Expertly mixed.
Acres of Farm,
Buffalo Herds.
That's what its like,
Above the Birds.
-By bran

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: i am interested in poetry and wood like to kno of any poems u've ritten or ur favorite poem. also, do you like mine? here it is: 'Above the Birds'
Above the trees,
Above the clouds.
Listening
To nature's sounds.
Rolling feilds
Of green and brown
Streaked across
The far-below ground.
Roads that turn,
Rivers that twist.
So many colors,
Expertly mixed.
Acres of Farm,
Buffalo Herds.
That's what its like,
Above the Birds.
-By bran

I like it. looks like ur n2 short stuff... short and sweet, but it paints a vivid picture... like short brush strokes... it intensifies everything. no filler stuff... just... pure, simple. it's great. keep it up.
i think I'll make my poem a question all its own. check it out.

It's great that you are interested in poetry. so are we. I suggest that you read, read, read all types of poetry to see which you like the best. This helps you with your own poetry, also with your spelling. Now you're poem is called "Above the birds." What's above the birds? Open sky and clouds right? all the things you've described are on the ground below the birds. So the title doesn't really fit. It should be "Below the birds." You haven't said much about above the trees and clouds. It's more of what's below. I'm not trying to be mean. I'm trying to help you. I think you have the mind of a poet. You just need to get it organized. You can do it. good luck and keep writing.

that's a good poem. its a great start. one thing about poetry is that you've always got to keep writing. practice makes perfect. one of my favorite poems is by e. e. cummings and its called, she being brand. its about a car/girl. (wink wink nudge nudge)

brava!!!!!

girl that poem is good try saying one at school

Your poem is actually quite good. You make no mistakes, but there is something missing. You describe what the Earth is like from far above, from above the birds very eloquently, but you add no opinion or emotion to it. Keep writing poems about anything that inspires you, and they will keep getting better.

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW!!!!!!
that is like the BEST poem that i have heard in a VERY long time, you should put more poems on here, i will read them all, again WOW!!!!!!
keep going with the poems,
have a wonderful day, and one Q:where do you get your inspiration from?great poem!
thanx,
i really love you girl,

Your poetry shows promise. You have a good feel for imagery. Keep writing, you have talent.

Very nice, bran. It has a really good cadence and it's fun to read.