The day Dave died, 2. How is this poem?

Question:The day Dave died

Dave died today, a stain
Sour, lost and in vain
Glued to his chain
Clearly inhumane.
As a nerd, Dave remained mundane
He tried once to explain
That he jumped on a train
He said it was so urbain
Gossip so inane
Much so that he was insane
More so that he was champagne
He was a walking campaign.
The allure of the arcane
In Dave, sounded like pain
For Dave had a brain
Which was a constrain
Much though he did deign
That the world was his reign
More though was Dave the bane
That of the sane.
The falling rain
Showed it's disdain
At the funeral of that remain
Although I entertain
I will obtain
A court ordered refrain
In case of the preordain
Of a macabre feign.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: The day Dave died

Dave died today, a stain
Sour, lost and in vain
Glued to his chain
Clearly inhumane.
As a nerd, Dave remained mundane
He tried once to explain
That he jumped on a train
He said it was so urbain
Gossip so inane
Much so that he was insane
More so that he was champagne
He was a walking campaign.
The allure of the arcane
In Dave, sounded like pain
For Dave had a brain
Which was a constrain
Much though he did deign
That the world was his reign
More though was Dave the bane
That of the sane.
The falling rain
Showed it's disdain
At the funeral of that remain
Although I entertain
I will obtain
A court ordered refrain
In case of the preordain
Of a macabre feign.

I read it twice and I can see the meaning in some places, but I have to think too hard to enjoy it. It's probably me. Your choice of wording overall is wonderful and rhyming is also very good. You are clearly a poet, though! Keep on working!

i like it but add more emoness to it
it deserves it

it is good, but more emotion i guess...

I can't tell if you are serious or not.
Sorry. It's a bunch of gibberish rhyme.
No I don't think it is.
sorry, if you are serious:)

It's god for a bad Rap song....