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Question:This poem is called the :Hidden remnants of who i really am

The boy inside me is never truly seen

He sits in a corner

In a locked cage rapped in chains

Hidden in a spot no one has ever seen in my heat

Buried under the cold surface that shields it

The boy cries for the feelings that are untold and unsaid

While he waits in the cold darkness for the chains to unlock

The door to open and for the ice to break

So he can be free and speak what has been hidden for so long

But then he boy cries more for hopelessness that the chains will never come undone

And he will always have these emotions that are hidden behind the fake boys masks that seem so real and look to be true to everyone else


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: This poem is called the :Hidden remnants of who i really am

The boy inside me is never truly seen

He sits in a corner

In a locked cage rapped in chains

Hidden in a spot no one has ever seen in my heat

Buried under the cold surface that shields it

The boy cries for the feelings that are untold and unsaid

While he waits in the cold darkness for the chains to unlock

The door to open and for the ice to break

So he can be free and speak what has been hidden for so long

But then he boy cries more for hopelessness that the chains will never come undone

And he will always have these emotions that are hidden behind the fake boys masks that seem so real and look to be true to everyone else

i think you hide behind your poetry. your shy, so you write about what you think is your life. deep and depressed. soon you will release your self, brake the chains on your own. good poem

you need to show people wqho you really are..show them that you do know who you are at that you are important to yourself good luck

k i'll ask right now. who r u really? tell me please. its a rlly good poem though.