Realistic poem?

Question:thank you everyone who asnwered my other question about the poem...and you helped me a lot....
well i made up my mind and felt like writing about the summer night by the ocean....

i already have some ideas like for example:
-the night is dark
-air is fresh and cool
-stars are decorating the sky
-moon is shining brightly
-waves in the ocean making the night cool

and thats all what i have...is it good so far....thats just brainstorming ideas.
do you have any other ideas, so i could continue the poem....
this is more of a hotel night in the summer poem....just describing whats outside the window in the hotel room....

thank you so much for your help!

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: thank you everyone who asnwered my other question about the poem...and you helped me a lot....
well i made up my mind and felt like writing about the summer night by the ocean....

i already have some ideas like for example:
-the night is dark
-air is fresh and cool
-stars are decorating the sky
-moon is shining brightly
-waves in the ocean making the night cool

and thats all what i have...is it good so far....thats just brainstorming ideas.
do you have any other ideas, so i could continue the poem....
this is more of a hotel night in the summer poem....just describing whats outside the window in the hotel room....

thank you so much for your help!

So far I would have to say it is good, I am afraid I don't really have much in the line of ideas to help you. That pretty much will have to come from yourself, as it is your poem and your vision. I am looking forward to seeing a finished poem. Be sure to let me know when your masterpiece is completed.

sounded pretty good to me....and im not a big poetry person.

I'm not going to give you lines, but a suggestion. Find a picture or something that relates to what you want ot write about and let it inspire you. Examine it, and write from the inner depths of your heart, mind, and soul.

what the hell is it about? what happening at the Beach on this dark night with the moon shining bright? why are you there? your just putting words together that not a poem it a location

yes! that is very good! u could take things from ur personal experiences (if u have ever been to an island). take hawaii for example, a person in waikiki could be writing a postcard to a family member telling them how beautiful it is. the pom trees swaying, cool breezes flow in through ur window, stuff like that.