Poem...... comment?

Question:im lost and im found
they can only see
im lost in a crowd
but i have to be me

i dont have to be you
i dont have to be anyone else
i dont want to be used
i wanna be myself

im gonna be unique
im being who i am
i dont have to be sheek (sp idk... hehe)
i am what i am

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: im lost and im found
they can only see
im lost in a crowd
but i have to be me

i dont have to be you
i dont have to be anyone else
i dont want to be used
i wanna be myself

im gonna be unique
im being who i am
i dont have to be sheek (sp idk... hehe)
i am what i am

very good, it is to the point. light and sweet
i believe that's you.

good job laney

thats cool !

Ugh...

That's "chic", not "sheek", and have you ever heard of punctuation? I'm sorry to be mean, but it's very cliche. Try reading some other poetry to improve your style.

I like it!!

its okay

I like it it's good it's spelled chic seriously i learned that word in fourth grade!

Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. I don't know how old you are, but it sounds like my writings when I had less experience with writing. Keep it up and you'll be really good with your words and feelings one day. ;)

i like it. it's you unique

dude this is good =]

i really like it!