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Question:Momentary lapse of time

Have you had it,
that momentary lapse of time?
The world stops,
And pain is all you feel.
Or time freezes
and joy overcomes your soul.
Have you felt it,
That momentary lapse of time?
When nothing matters,
only the pure ecstasy engulfing your body...
When you blink your eyes,
And the years have gone by,
Till you only have your memories,
of that momentary lapse of time.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Momentary lapse of time

Have you had it,
that momentary lapse of time?
The world stops,
And pain is all you feel.
Or time freezes
and joy overcomes your soul.
Have you felt it,
That momentary lapse of time?
When nothing matters,
only the pure ecstasy engulfing your body...
When you blink your eyes,
And the years have gone by,
Till you only have your memories,
of that momentary lapse of time.

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