I wrote this for my best friend when her boyfriend broke up with her...opinions?

Question:I look at my best friend,
and what is it I see
Someone so sweet, so caring
Whose always been there for me

You have given me that gift,
I always know you are there
No longer can I say no one does..
because I know you care.

So seeing as you've done this for me
This is so small for me to do
Write something that comes from the heart,
that explains my best friend; you.

I hope you know I think you're strong,
and no one should bring you down
For when I was sad and wanting to,
You made it impossible to frown

So learn from yourself, and all that you do,
and best friend I hope you see,
that no matter who hurts you, or brings you down
Someone will be there; me.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I look at my best friend,
and what is it I see
Someone so sweet, so caring
Whose always been there for me

You have given me that gift,
I always know you are there
No longer can I say no one does..
because I know you care.

So seeing as you've done this for me
This is so small for me to do
Write something that comes from the heart,
that explains my best friend; you.

I hope you know I think you're strong,
and no one should bring you down
For when I was sad and wanting to,
You made it impossible to frown

So learn from yourself, and all that you do,
and best friend I hope you see,
that no matter who hurts you, or brings you down
Someone will be there; me.

I really hope your friend cherrishes this wonderful piece or writing you have made for her. You felt your words and it shows. I really like it. Kisses, Sandra

thats is so sweet just like ur poem
its heart warming

Whoa... That's deep.

whoa that's pretty good that must've taken u a long time. i think she'll love it

Deeep