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Question:Mania of Masturbation

Her smile lights your senses
Your fingers trip slightly
Frosted, her look so trysting
Forlorn, so trembling
Amore, il mio amore
You feel the sureness so relished

Entangled in her kiss
you watch her finger squeeze
fluffy soft white bosoms
smiles of tepid desires
Amore, per amore
You grip the shaft frantically
Best for grease

Lids flickering, fluttering, inviting
Sounds frustrating your fingers
Her slit scores a blush
tongues slithering crushing tasting
amore, amore infinito
you flush in a writhing arch
She delightfully turns and arcs backward
Her behind slick and fleshed
Fire burns your soul

Grounding slowly, freely, merrily
shaft plunging faster and deeper
there, you feel it rouse visions
you now thrusting bucking moaning
she full and soaring
amore, amore eterno
her eyes tearful and spectacular
glasses frothing in desire and expectation
longing respite as you give her your all


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Mania of Masturbation

Her smile lights your senses
Your fingers trip slightly
Frosted, her look so trysting
Forlorn, so trembling
Amore, il mio amore
You feel the sureness so relished

Entangled in her kiss
you watch her finger squeeze
fluffy soft white bosoms
smiles of tepid desires
Amore, per amore
You grip the shaft frantically
Best for grease

Lids flickering, fluttering, inviting
Sounds frustrating your fingers
Her slit scores a blush
tongues slithering crushing tasting
amore, amore infinito
you flush in a writhing arch
She delightfully turns and arcs backward
Her behind slick and fleshed
Fire burns your soul

Grounding slowly, freely, merrily
shaft plunging faster and deeper
there, you feel it rouse visions
you now thrusting bucking moaning
she full and soaring
amore, amore eterno
her eyes tearful and spectacular
glasses frothing in desire and expectation
longing respite as you give her your all

Bravo.
A+

Your gay. Yay.

i personally didnt like it but it was good though..